Great concept, needs some work
Actually, if you talk a little clearer, the sound is ten times better (like you did on that... I think it was on the Pennsylvania piece). Also, of course, if you planned and scripted everything instead of making it up as you went, it would be a whole lot easier for you to talk loud and clear. :-)
I like the concept, but... You don't really show it from its best side here. You do a great job on the lipsyncing, but that's almost all the animation you do. What about adding a whole lot more action - things happening instead of only your lips and eyeballs moving?
And you still have that all-cranked-up size. What's the big idea? :-) I had to set my browser to full-screen viewing to watch it all.
So... What does that leave? Uhm, you have great lipsyncing, and a good concept for a movie (or more). Two areas so many others struggle with - meaning, you're doing a great job if you keep improving on those other fields.
Add music, add more action (I can handle just sitting here staring at you talking, but when your head don't even move...), write a script and talk loud and clear into the microphone (yes, I believe that your microphone still is capable for this kind of work). That way, you have not only a working concept, but a GOOD concept. Stick to it.